Tuesday, May 12, 2015

Ottava Rima: Scorned

There's blood on the counter and blood on the floor.
All of the blood leads to the kitchen where
Your body lays peacefully next to the whore.
I don't see blood anymore, just flowers there,
That you left for me because you're sorry for
Ruining our marriage and leaving me bare
Of any dignity I had left to use,
But you got caught so I ended the abuse.

6 comments:

  1. This is just woahhh! This gave me goosebumbs

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  2. Good!!! It's meant to be totally creepy ❤️❤️ glad you liked it babe! ;)

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  3. Omg this is great and weird and awesome all at once

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  4. Love the use of second person for the husband. It's clear what's going on without you saying it directly. Well done!

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  5. Love the use of second person for the husband. It's clear what's going on without you saying it directly. Well done!

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  6. Love the use of second person for the husband. It's clear what's going on without you saying it directly. Well done!

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